The references to various Unicode publications could be improved in section 21.1.3.10, the Bibliography, and the Normative References:
21.1.3.10 Note 2:
- Unicode Annex #15, Unicode Normalization Forms → Unicode Standard Annex #15, Unicode Normalization Forms,
- Unicode Technical Note #5 Canonical Equivalence in Applications → Unicode Technical Note #5, Canonical Equivalence in Applications
- URLs would be nice, similar to section 20.3.1.7:
http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr15/
http://www.unicode.org/notes/tn5/
http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr10/
Bibliography:
- Remove item 7 (that's already in the Normative References)
- Add:
Unicode Technical Note #5, Canonical Equivalence in Applications
http://www.unicode.org/notes/tn5/
Unicode Technical Standard #10, Unicode Collation Algorithm, version 5.1.0, or successor
http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr10/
Normative References:
- Add URLs:
Unicode: http://www.unicode.org/versions/latest
UAX #15: http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr15/
UAX #31: http://www.unicode.org/reports/tr31/
fixed in rev34 editor's draft
fixed in rev34
If we need years in the Bibliography, then item 8 should have year 2008 (for Unicode 5.1.0).
Fixed in rev35 editor's draft
I can't find anything that says we have to list the year to say "Unicode Inc.". So, I dropped both.
fixed in rev35
Verified in rev 35 draft.